BETWEEN
I walk between shadows
Of lines unseen
I walk between laughter
And unheard screams
The light, the dark
All my dreams
Loudly, silently
It seems
Loudly, silently
All my dreams
The light, the dark
And unheard screams
I walk between laughter
Of lines unseen
I walk between shadows
(It seems)
©2009-2012 All Rights Reserved
The irry place between reality and fiction, gave me a shiver.
Sorry to give you the shivers, Miss Ina…but many thanks for the comment!
Rachael
So true… excellent writing! Love the structure, it adds so much…
Thanks so much! I really do appreciate it…
Rachael
Beautiful…..I love this
Glad you did! Thanks much…
Rachael
beautiful write!
Many thanks!
Rachael
I have nominated you for ‘The Blog of the Year Award 2012′. Thank you for inspiring me and following my blog!
Alex
http://worldlywinds.com/2012/12/16/blog-of-the-year-2012-2/
Thank you so much for the kindness! It is truly appreciated…
Rachael
You are welcome Rachael!!
Hard to put into words the effect of this piece… ephemeral… chimeras… things not quite seen but out of the corner of the eye. I enjoyed reading it and will read it more than once! thanks!
This one is a bit abstract…Many thanks!
Rachael
Some people walk the lines, some people walk outside them, some people criss cross and zig zag…It takes all kinds…
That’s what makes the world wonderful…Thank you for the comment…
Rachael
I think your poem is awesome.
Many thanks…
Rachael
An amazing poem. Rachael your poetry moves me. I’m so pleased to be able to explore your work.
Thank you greatly!
Rachael
Ah! The narrowest of place to walk, a wonderful write.
Most definitely…many thanks!
Rachael