Intricacies of the Mind Mysterious
The mists circle
Wandering aimlessly
Concentric motions of inhabited time
Wavering
In the winds of wonderment
Chaliced
In the makings of the mind.
What lies behind the seeing of the eyes
Beyond that
Which cannot be noticed in the view…
Thoughts
Left to the thinking
Passages of infinity held
Hovering
In solemn shadows
Bent
And flowing endlessly.
Rindles of resemblance
Raging quietly–
Understanding
Left behind.
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I wasn’t expecting the last 2 lines….! Well done.. 😉
Many thanks! I do appreciate it…
Rachael:)
Hi Rachael, this is such a mysterious poem to dream away, lovely!
Hi, Miss Ina! Many thanks…do hope all is well with you..best wishes!
Rachael 🙂
This is beautiful Rachael… it’s so full of magical words and fluid thoughts. I love how you construct your phrases and paint such creative pictures.
You are always so kind with your words…my simple thank you’s seem quite inadequite…I do so appreciate your words…
Rachael 🙂
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reblogged with delight…..wordsmith, you know your art
Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment and the reblog…I truly appreciate your kindness! Best wishes…
Rachael 🙂
my pleasure dear heart
Your words are always so soothing…they relaxes my spirit, and joyfully embrace my heart always leaving a smile! Thanks!
Always glad to share a smile…my thanks!
Rachael 🙂
Everything in life is constantly evolving…no sooner do we solve one riddle that another emerges…It is a neverending quest…
Mysteries make the cognitive wheels turn…without a reason for thought the mind can petrify…many thanks!
Rachael 🙂
I love the word: rindles. I did not know. That first stanza is so descriptive, I felt I could practically reach out and grab the Holy Grail!! Super, windswept Wuthering Heights stuff…
So glad you enjoyed…Thank you ever so much!
Rachael 🙂
Lovely meter and flow, and meanings. Truly a ‘thinker’. Thank you for sharing! 🙂
I appreciate it…
Rachael 🙂
Beautiful writing.
Many thanks!
Rachael 🙂
“What lies behind the seeing of the eyes
Beyond that
Which cannot be noticed in the view…”
I kept thinking someone was watching someone watching then
and each was trying to figure out the other was thinking….
what a wonderful work of art you have entwined in our minds…
Thank you….I enjoyed this very much
Take Care…
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Glad you enjoyed!
Best wishes to you as well…
Rachael 🙂
Seekers keep seeking … wonderful poem and I shared on Twitter!